Seeing you standing there, as handsome as sin takes my breath away
Your presence always light up my face
Lighten up my world as well
My world revolves round your being
Being with you forever is my one dream
My one dream stalled with those words
Those words were nails on my coffin
Nailing it repeatedly
Repeatedly it still haunts me
You said you want to leave
Leave me? Why?
For what? For where? For who?
Where did I get it wrong?
Was it all a mirage?
Was our love a figment of my imagination?
Is this how things end?
I’ve made up my mind
If you leave me; can I come too
Saying no doesn’t cut it
I’m coming with you
End of the world, that’s us
If you leave me, I’m coming with you
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Woaaaaah, this is B-R-I-L-L-I-A-N-T
Short,precise and well written. Luvly poem!!!
Be sub-ing me with poem ooo… Shey you know… End of the World.. Na me nd you together…
This poem gan will make me hold my pillow tight tonight……..
If you leave me, can I come too
Bringing with me the torch of love
To illuminate the alley of your darkest thoughts
Baba Zebbook just added spicy to an already delicious piece… See brilliant minds relating together!
Wow.. Lovely… It touched a part of me…
I absolutely love this poem.I can hear a song in there .Brilliant!!!
sincerely…good poem but you’ll have to do better to impress me.
Please come
I love you but I feel inadequate
But if you do come it will be bliss
You will leave the confines of societal expectation?
You will love me without buts?
I am enough for you?
Then by all means pls come
Short and very well written. I can’t envisage leaving the ONE I’m with right now too. It would never be the same without her!
Fantastic piece…..how can he or she leave after reading this? This is a true ‘I go die’ stuff. Well done.
Hope you leave me in a better spot and with better person who deserves me more. Thanks tope, you are good. Though shot but makes alot of senses.
Nice! Good Work ma’am. I particularly love the fact that it’s not too wordy LOL.
nicely done!
Reminds me of Shakespeare’s Othello; when the one you love has other ideas that do not necessarily include you. Brilliant!
So simple, so true, so art… Love it!
Very brilliant.
Beautiful mind!!!
Love it